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A&G類高分寫(xiě)作思路有何不同

Category: 托福雅思, 留學(xué)考試 Date: 2019年1月31日下午4:32

A&G類高分寫(xiě)作思路有何不同

雅思寫(xiě)作大作文(Task2)四項(xiàng)評(píng)分細(xì)則（Task Response, Coherence and Cohesion, Lexical Resource, Grammatical Range and Accuracy）中第一項(xiàng)是對(duì)作文思路和內(nèi)容的打分，這一項(xiàng)的分?jǐn)?shù)也基本奠定了文章整體的分?jǐn)?shù)走向，因?yàn)檫壿嫼驼Z(yǔ)言的展現(xiàn)都基于內(nèi)容的扣題有效。

但是，在實(shí)際復(fù)習(xí)或考試中，很多同學(xué)并不清楚寫(xiě)作思路和內(nèi)容的重要性。大多數(shù)考生只求寫(xiě)作時(shí)“有沒(méi)有思路”或“內(nèi)容算不算跑題”，如此的標(biāo)準(zhǔn)和追求，想拿6真的很費(fèi)勁。

此外，有時(shí)明明是A類考生，作文思路卻接近口語(yǔ)素材；再或者，參加的是G類考試，卻用A類高分作文較難的思路來(lái)折磨自己，心累。

在這里要提醒大家的是，現(xiàn)在A類和G類大作文題庫(kù)重合率越來(lái)越高（超過(guò)80%）。換句話說(shuō)，過(guò)去只出現(xiàn)在A類考試中的話題和題目，比如犯罪類問(wèn)題，現(xiàn)在也會(huì)經(jīng)常出現(xiàn)在G類考試中，但頻率確實(shí)略低于A類考試；G類考試較簡(jiǎn)單的高頻考題，比如看電視對(duì)孩子的影響，現(xiàn)在也會(huì)時(shí)不時(shí)出現(xiàn)在A類考試中。

總結(jié)一下，A類大作文考題涉及的話題和討論對(duì)象更多，同時(shí)包含部分G類常規(guī)考題；G類大作文考題整體難度略低于A類考試，雖然涉及少量較有難度的考題，但A類考題中比較靈活、較有挑戰(zhàn)的題目并不會(huì)出現(xiàn)。

來(lái)，上真題：

When new towns are planned, it is important to build more public parks or sports facilities than shopping centers for people to spend their free time. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

我們?cè)谶@里分析的這道題目難度系數(shù)適中，在A和G類考試中都不止一次出現(xiàn)。這道題目是城市類問(wèn)題中出現(xiàn)比較頻繁的建設(shè)、規(guī)劃布局類問(wèn)題，屬于多討論對(duì)象題目：“public parks or sports facilities”，“shopping centers”。

首先說(shuō)說(shuō)推薦給G類考生的寫(xiě)作思路：

建設(shè)新的城市，修建不同的基礎(chǔ)設(shè)施和建筑物功能目的不同；所以這道題可以側(cè)重某一個(gè)方面論證或走中立結(jié)構(gòu)。修建“public parks or sports facilities”對(duì)人們的健康有益，并且可以美化城市環(huán)境；建設(shè)“shopping centers”可以滿足人們對(duì)現(xiàn)代生活的需求，并有助于促進(jìn)城市經(jīng)濟(jì)發(fā)展。G類作文能寫(xiě)明白這些內(nèi)容就棒棒了！

A類和G類作文對(duì)思路要求的廣度和高度不一樣，尤其是需要6分以上的分?jǐn)?shù)，所以A類考生要做到：

1.?首先需要明確一點(diǎn)：雅思作文考題幾乎全部關(guān)乎社會(huì)現(xiàn)象和社會(huì)問(wèn)題，尤其是A類作文的出題一定是反映當(dāng)下實(shí)際生活，所以在構(gòu)思時(shí)要盡量客觀、思考全面，提出的觀點(diǎn)不要過(guò)于personal 。比如，審題時(shí)想想大多數(shù)人生活中的選擇會(huì)怎樣，寫(xiě)作的方向是否和現(xiàn)實(shí)生活統(tǒng)一。舉例說(shuō)明：談及到國(guó)際旅游業(yè)，無(wú)論題目涉及到何種消極影響的討論，不要忘記旅游產(chǎn)業(yè)作為全球最大的產(chǎn)業(yè)之一整體是積極的發(fā)展；再比如，科技在日常生活中的應(yīng)用，無(wú)論題目出現(xiàn)針對(duì)何種隱患的討論，在大多數(shù)情況下科技對(duì)現(xiàn)代生活的積極作用是不可取代的。

2.?其次，在第一點(diǎn)的基礎(chǔ)上，尤其是在寫(xiě)議論文的時(shí)候，審題一定要結(jié)合相關(guān)的社會(huì)熱點(diǎn)問(wèn)題，這樣文章觀點(diǎn)的鮮明度和論證的力度都會(huì)大大提升。比如我們分析的這道題目，建造更多的“public parks or sports facilities”可以給人們提供更多的健身、鍛煉的機(jī)會(huì)，可以借此推廣健康的生活方式，畢竟“The health level of the general public is declining and most people are leading a sedentary lifestyle”。側(cè)重這個(gè)角度寫(xiě)作正好可以結(jié)合健康這個(gè)高頻出題的話題：現(xiàn)代城市人們健康問(wèn)題有隱患，加上人口老齡化，醫(yī)療服務(wù)對(duì)政府的財(cái)政壓力很大… … 這一系列嚴(yán)肅問(wèn)題的解決可直接通過(guò)預(yù)防，即建造更多的“public parks or sports facilities”得以緩解。如此論證，還缺可寫(xiě)的內(nèi)容么？當(dāng)然，并不是說(shuō)不需要建設(shè)“shopping centers”，可以將這部分的討論放在讓步段。

3.? 最后，基本但卻極其重要的一點(diǎn)要提醒大家：議論文無(wú)論用什么結(jié)構(gòu)展開(kāi)，一定要體現(xiàn)辯證思想，切忌單一論證一面；就算力度很大的支持一個(gè)觀點(diǎn)，讓步段也需要提及注意的地方。

雅思備考中，請(qǐng)大家務(wù)必熟悉各個(gè)話題及常見(jiàn)的出題角度、整理總結(jié)成熟的思路、學(xué)會(huì)靈活的審題、使用最新的素材范文練習(xí)，這樣才不會(huì)悶頭苦惱“我怎么想不出來(lái)這樣的思路呢？”

參考范文：

When new towns are planned, it is important to build more public parks or sports facilities than shopping centers for people to spend their free time. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

When there is a town development initiative under way, the improvement of community facilities is considered in the development plan. While some are in favor of the construction of shopping centers, I would argue that more public parks and sports facilities should be built.

Initially, well-designed public parks and sports facilities can make a place more attractive physically. They can provide gathering spots that improve the social character of community life and serve to increase residents’ interaction with one another; therefore, they create a greater sense of community that reaches across different community sectors.

Secondly, well-equipped public parks and sports facilities offer exposure to and opportunities for a wide variety of physical activities. It is evident that the health level of the general publicis declining rapidly now and that most people are leading a sedentary lifestyle. For many citizens, affordable and accessible community facilities have been their introduction to sports activities and a more active lifestyle. People with low income, particularly the youth, may have very limited chances for regular exercise. Thus, the investment in more public parks and sports facilities is crucial in encouraging a healthier lifestyle.

Undoubtedly, shopping centers today are necessary not only because of their roles as places for purchasing products for daily consumption but also due to their recreational functions to meet the need of urban lifestyle. But given the fact real estate developers have already given more than enough attention to their importance when planning a new place, we need to consider previously ignored aspects .

To conclude, I believe that public parks and sports facilities contribute to the general quality of life in the community and that there should be more of them than places such as shopping centers.

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